Editing and Final Draft of Lina's Fourth Journal Entry
Lesson Outline
Charlie edited his draft of Lina's Fourth Journal Entry. He focused on fixing spelling and punctuation. He typed his final draft on the computer. Charlie and I began to read the next chapter in, "The People of Sparks." Charlie focused on making new predictions and began to develop an opinion of which side he supports in the book.
Today, Netra and I outlined the arguments in Aristotle's Nicomachean Ethics. We then created an outline for her paper and discussed ways to tie in his arguments to today's society.
Today, Netra and I outlined the bullet points and quotes she would integrate into her essay. We created a thesis and subpoints to cover, made an outline and then drafted the first draft. We went through the essay for a quick revision and made sure all of her quotes were correctly cited, and that the points she made progressed logically.