English IV
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Readings, Journal Writing, Vocabulary
Lesson Outline
Abby concluded several reading and writing assignments and then continued in her advanced vocabulary study.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
NLR subbed for Julie Eggiman who is out today.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Required Readings and Journal Writing
Lesson Outline
Today Abby worked on several required readings and associated journal entries.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
NLR subbed for Julie Eggiman who is out today.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Going over the final touches on two personal essays
Lesson Outline
The plan that Katya and I agreed to for your afternoon class was simple: At 1 p.m. today, Katya was to submit her two personal essays. We were scheduled to look at both papers, checking for wording, mechanical errors, the organization of each paper and the development of each paragraph. I called her several times beginning at 1 p.m. Each time, I got a "No Response." Thinking that Katya needed more time, I messaged her that I was moving the deadline to 5 P.M. I was looking for those two personal essays so I could add them to the one assignment Katya has completed since March 13. The 5 p.m. deadline has come and gone. I have received no communication from Katya, and no Googe documents from Katya have been forwarded to me. I was hoping to add two completed assignment to the one five-page research paper Katya handed in, but we are back to only one completed assignmnent: her five-page research paper. I need to be honest: I am disappointed in Katya performance and her commitment.
Assignment
None
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
0
Lesson Comments
Katya never showed up for class. She did not hand in the two assignments due today by 5 p.m. I was waiting to see them appear on Google Docs. To be honest, I am disappointed in Katya's performance and her commitment.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
End of the year writing prompts for seniors
Lesson Outline
Alexa and I talked about writing a reflection regarding her high school years. We discussed in depth her academic and acting career. We also talked about different ways to write about her final thoughts about high school. After much discussion, Alexa wrote a very nice paragraph which she titled "The Goodbye Paragraph."
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Writing Two Essays
Lesson Outline
Katya was given two assignments to submit today. The first one: Go online to TEDTalks, TED-Ed, The Moth, or NPR Ted Radio Hour. Pick any session you want. After listening to it, write an essay about your experience. You might want to discuss what you learned, what surprised you, etc. The second assignment followed the discussion of Raymond Carver's poem "Happiness" we had yesterday. I provided Katya with a template for that essay: Raymond Carver a story about...to make the point that...... My own experience with... yields a point that is similar/different/similar and different. What I take away from my experience with ... is.........As a result, I conclude.... Today's lesson was to be spent fine-tuning the drafts that Katya wrote. To help Katya with this assignment, I gave Katya a sample opening paragraph. Complications: Just as we got started Katya informed me that she had just deleted her Happiness essay, so she had nothing to show me. When we turned to the TEDTalks essay, Katya pulled up a Google Doc to show me she had "started" an outline. At 11:15, I told Katya to get the two essays into final form, ready for me to evaluate at 1:00 p.m.
Assignment
Finish writing two essays by 1 p.m. today
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Katya came to class unprepared. She was supposed to submit two essays to me today. She claimed she deleted one of those essays just before she was going to show it to me. The other essay was not beyond the outline stage. I gave Katya from 11:15 to 1 p.m. to write both essays for me to discuss with her and later grade. I am very disappointed in Katya's performance and her commitment.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Shakespeare's sonnets and senior reflection
Lesson Outline
Alexa and I read and discussed three of Shakespeare's most popular sonnets. Sonnets 18, 30, 33 all deal with love and loss which fits nicely with the themes in the last two novels that Alexa has read. We discussed composing a Shakespearean sonnet. We looked at examples. We also discussed the writing of a senior reflection which Alexa has decided to write instead. She will compose a narrative of her early, middle and high school years as a senior reflection as she prepares to graduate.
Session Minutes
120
Minutes Student Attended
75
Lesson Comments
We only had 15 minutes in our first session because Alexa came into the class late.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Analzing poems and using the poem as a jumping off point for an essay
Lesson Outline
Emailed Katya two handouts: "Poetry" my guidelines for discussing any poem, and a poem by Raymond Carver entitled "Happiness." Carefully went through the "Poetry" handout to make sure Katya grasped the concepts and terms. Katya read the poem outloud. Katya suggested the poem should really be renamed "Morning" because the poem is about a morning. That comment led to a discussion of how important it is to see the significance of the ending of something. E.g., the final tone of a conversation or the final mood of a play. That led to a full discussion of the last six lines of the poem and the philosophical and psychological statement the narrator is making about happiness: it comes on unexpectedly and it goes beyond words. Gave Katya a writing assignment, asking her to use the poem to jump into a discussion of happiness from her own perspective. Google Doc to be written out as a draft to be discussed tomorrow at 1 p.m.
Assignment
Complete draft of happiness essay
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
Katya went along with discussion points. She said she understood the lesson and the assignment. I appreciated her cooperation. Katya and I still do not know how many more class sessions we will have together. As a result, I am creating one-hour lessons with a writing assignment attached due the next session. A second research paper is out of the question, though Katya needs more practice researching, judging the reliability of sources, and writing the research paper following all the required formats.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Introduce Purdue OWL; Next Wrting Assignment
Lesson Outline
Walked Katya through Purdue OWL website, pointing out all information the site has on college-level writing, researching, citing; the MLA and the APA style guides; the sample subject-specific reports and papers; as well as guides for writing resumes and job search letters. Went on to discuss the fact we do not yet know how many hours are left for Katya to complete. Went on to discuss using TEDTalks, TED-Ed, The Moth, and Ted Radio Hours to find a talk on a subject of interest to Katya. Her assignment: Listen to the talk/see the video, take notes, and write a five-paragraph essay about her experience; what she learned; what surprised her; what was exciting or disappointing. The essay to be written as a Google Doc, submitted tomorrow, Friday, May28.
Assignment
Write and hand in essay
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
50
Lesson Comments
Katya arrived 10 minutes late, after Elise contacted Katya's mother.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Short story unit
Lesson Outline
I presented two short stories to Alexa. I presented an introduction to both: "The Fall of the House of Usher" by Edgar Allen Poe and "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty" by James Thurber. Alexa chose Thurber's story to read. We talked about the time period of the story and some necessary background information. We began reading the story, and Alexa will finish reading it for homework.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
30
Lesson Comments
Alexa signed on 30 minutes late--said that she had a rough day.
Session Date
Lesson Topic
Last proofreading of research paper; discussion of our next project
Lesson Outline
Went over final proofreading results: page 2 "seem" not "seems"; page 3 improved wording: Xenia P. Montenegro Ph.D. who studied the responses";page 4 add "importantly"; page 5 use "study" instead of "article"; page 5 clarify by saying "Too often popular articles directed to the general public"; rewording so concluding sentence reads: To go back to the title of this paper, the answer to "Who Pulled the Plug? is the spouse who verbally, physically, or emotionaly abuses his or her partner." Also, corrected spacing on Works Cited page. Next, focued on the list of projects I gave Katya so Katya could choose a project from the list or come up with one of her own. My list: (1) Write a paper on a controversial person (e.g. Donald Trump); (2) Write a comparison/contrast paper; (3) going back to original project which got lost: Katya to look at 10 painting on the subject of the subway, choose 1st, 2nd, 3rd place and write up what the 1st and 2nd place winners' strengths were; (4) discuss 10 poems, followed by a written analysis of each poem; (5) write a fictional or non-fictional autography; (6) write impromptu essays based on prompts; (7) explain a process; (8) describe a problem and the solutions people have come up with, identifying proposals that did not work and those that were only semi-successful, saving the best solution for last and defending it as the best solution.
Assignment
Start project and have something ready by Thursday
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
0
Lesson Comments
Katya did not show up for her lesson today. I called Katya several times but each time I was given the message that katya is "Unavailable." At 11:15, I called Elise and reported that Katya did not attend class. Elise said she would report the problem to Nicole. If this is Katya's pattern (not showing up for class), I am wondering how she will ever complete English IV, her required senior English class. I am trying to give Katya several project options so I can give her credit for work completed, but if Katya continues to not show up for class, I think we have a problem.