Raquel has worked very hard on this paper and I think she's done a great job. I heard what her Principal said and must say, I'm very shocked. Our process is that Raquel writes the paper, and then I go back and help her edit and clean it up. I also helped her organize her research and write an outline, but I'm confident that is well within the acceptable boundaries of a tutor. Her writing is a lot like Raquel, energetic and all over the place. I've been working to get her to be more focused and concise and frankly, she's come a long way since we started working together.