Session Date
Lesson Topic
Essay on WWI
Lesson Outline
Today we continued this history assignment that we began last week while Rachel was in Kauai on spring break. She is tasked with writing a 3-page essay on what she observes is the greatest lesson to learn from WWI. Rachel has wisely chosen to write about the weaknesses of the Versailles Treaty. It was a treaty based on punishment and not peace and it tragically leads to WWII. Since our last lesson, Rachel worked on finding quotes from the sources provided by her teacher to use in the essay. She found some great quotes for the beginning of the paper and she still needs to look for more of them. Rachel shared that her teacher liked the outline we comprised for the paper last week. Rachel was pleased with the introductory paragraph we worked on today. This has the potential to be a very strong essay. Rachel is short on time as the essay is due tomorrow and she has a lacrosse game this evening. Tonight, Rachel needs to look for additional primary source quotes and complete writing the essay. It's always a pleasure to work with Rachel.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
This has the potential to be a very strong essay. Rachel is short on time as the essay is due tomorrow and she has a lacrosse game this evening. I wish they had reached out to me earlier this week to continue to work on the assignment. Rachel has had several lacrosse games this week, so it may have been a challenge to find time.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
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