I talked with Teddy about what area he felt he needed the most work on, and his answer was the writing, so that's what we focused on today. We went over the basic outline for the essay and talked about developing his ideas and how to transition from one to the next. Afterward, I had Teddy write a practice essay and he did an excellent job. He needs to work on his pacing a bit, but if he follows the formula, he should do well.