Anthem paper. Zach finally agreed to work on his writing with me. He had a beginning outline for his Anthem paper, but it didn't follow the prompt. Zach goes out of his way to be alternative, both in what he writes and how he writes it. It makes sense that his grade is low as it appears that he doesn't like to follow the assignment. Also, rather than making concise and direct statements, he likes to turn an original phrase. While these are two qualities I would applaud in a college student, it's not what Benjamin is looking for. We'll continue to work on it.