Napolean paper
sentence structure

I wasn't allowed to edit his Napolean paper, but I did read it and gave Zach some notes to focus on when he proofreads it. (which he had not done.) We then talked about our plan to work on writing moving forward and Zach has agreed to read a book with me and work on his writing that way. We spent the rest of the session talking about compound/complex sentences and how to punctuate them.