Session Date
Lesson Topic
Writing with Detail
Lesson Outline
Today we focused on how to use specific examples to prove a point and how to use detail to make examples more convincing. At the end of class, I wrote three sentences and asked him to rewrite them with more detail. We talked about how it would be better to write a sentence about how the sun reflects off of the ocean rather than to just say that the ocean looks beautiful.
Session Minutes
60
Minutes Student Attended
60
Lesson Comments
He had a tough time coming up with examples and I had to draw them out of him. Cal has spent a lot of time in the bathroom at our last few sessions, which I think is his way of avoiding class time. I urge him to use the bathroom before class so that we're not taking away from class time. He was supposed to re-write an essay for homework, but he told me that he did it in the car on the way over, so I don't think it was his best work.
Session Hours
1.00
Hours Attended
1.00
Entry Status
Review Status
Student Name(s)
Subject
School