Haley and I tackled another set of reading comprehension passages. We are flying through the Princeton Review book! :) I believe that Haley is getting stronger. I am also looking at Haley's college essay. I will make some comments over the weekend to discuss with her. From what I see, we need to work on wordiness and repetition of ideas, and add some more descriptive techniques, such as "show don't tell, powerful adjectives, action verbs, dialogue, and characterization of Haley.