Haley and I reviewed her college essay. She sent it it me, I read it and commented all over it, and scanned and sent it back to her. I gave her advice working wordiness, creating a more personal tone, and adding "Show Don't Tell" and other descriptive writing techniques. I sent Haley samples of recent college essays from Johns Hopkins that admissions officers deem successful. Haley and I then moved on to SAT prep. We tackled English grammar and reading comprehension today.