Brandon and I got the feedback on the original draft of his college argument paper, taking note of the professor's comments to revise his paper. Once we got some key feedback, we began adding some evidence to his weaker points and insight where there was none.
We continued working on the globalization paper. Brandon had trouble focusing and coming up with things to say. But with help, we got through the majority of the paper and only have two paragraphs to write tomorrow.
We started working on the last paper for the class on globalization. We went through the material, of which Brandon has a pretty good understanding, and made a plan for the paper. We got through the first two paragraphs.
Sadie and I worked on how she can organize her essay, looking into ways that she can turn her research into specific points in support of her thesis. After we outlined her argument, we spent some time writing/revising her introduction, adding narrative details and/or quotes to bring life to her writing. We conducted research to help her in the specific points she needed, and ended with a discussion of how she can bring her argument home in the final section of her paper.
Brandon and I continued to work on his college essay, conducting research on his chosen topic. We were able to compile about 3 pages total, but Brandon will have to stay for extra time is he wants to finish tomorrow.
