We edited a few of Jayne's chapters, looking at possibly changing some grammar and words. I explained the importance of white space and new paragraphs as part of letting the reader rest and absorb or recognize the significance of a passage or sentence.

Jayne continues to work on her book and likes to reserve editing for a later date. When she gets tired of reading we read and talk about "The Hate U Give".

Jayne worked on her book today. She was incredibly focused.

We reviewed Jayne's short story, correcting any grammar, spelling, punctuation, and looking at any revisions for emphasis that she might want.

Jayne worked on her story the entire time, then sent me what she had written so that I could review it for editing, which we do together.

We discussed what was happening in the book "The Hate U Give" and how realistic it seemed to be, both in the events and as they affected Starr, the main character. Jayne also wrote, periodically sending her work to me for future editing.

Jayne worked on her short story, and when she was finished for the day, she emailed me the work she had done. We then had time to read from "The Hate U Give" and discuss it.

Jayne is working on her short stories, which she then sends me and I edit and later discuss with her. We went on to read "The Hate U Give".

Jayne wanted to continue working on her short stories, which she did for almost the entire time, at which point we read "The Hate You Give".

Jayne worked on her book.