After reading our outline an introduction, Josh and I spent some time planning for the Phase One section of his "My First Job" paper. Earlier, Josh decided that the moral of his narrative would be: "If you work hard you can accomplish any task." With this in mind, we tracked the necessary steps or phases that Josh had to outline to reach this conclusion. At first, Josh wanted to say that there was nothing hard about the job, but I reminded him that this conflicted with the moral of the narrative. Afterwards, he decided that Phase One should outline the nature of the work environment, how he felt and what was required of him, and that Phase Two would be where he describes how work was hard, but that with diligent effort, he was able to complete the task with great success. While writing, I had to remind Josh about punctuation like commas, periods, quotations, etc. On the whole, Josh's paper is moving along smoothly.