"Rest of the Story" Feature Writing 101 -The Structure let's see what he reports. Cameron did complete a paragraph with at least the Angle of his feature, which was a good one he identified and cultivated. 12th hole 15 monitor. ("Quiet Please") So with that angle, next we put meat on the bones. I explained a feature has to contrast, go beyond normal coverage. The contrast between seen and unseen. So built the lead up to the 'hook' of the story then talked about obtaining quotes on job description, freezing but fun, best part of job & benefits in life/golf game well beyond this tournament conclusion. Cameron then worked with me to create a conclusion to the feature story. Ideally, stories go full circle. Cameron really seemed to enjoy telling the rest of the story, the story viewers at home do not see and I'm sure, talking about a peer with a cool job during a PGA event, I asked him to type up (instead of pencil on paper notes) and print two copies of each of the reporting we've learned over the past few sessions. a) Live Report on the scene @ 1st Round b) Recap of Sea Pines PGA Event answering the 5 W's and giving viewers intrigue--young players to watch. And finally, the Feature Story. He will print and bring into our next session all 3 Reporting aspects and we'll explore script structure with the video half of the TV reporting script.
Assignment
Type up on documents all 3 Reporting styles and bring in two copies of each next season
Session Minutes
48
Minutes Student Attended
45
Lesson Comments
Cameron was alert, engaged and thinking through my challenging questions and writing an interesting feature story.
In today's class, we continued our discussion on mutations, talking about the effects of mutations on protein function. We also recapped on the different types of mutations that can occur, including frameshift, insertion, deletion, and point mutations.
The first Industrial Revolution started in 18th century Great Britain because it had new technology, advanced transportation, a colonial market to sell goods to, and strong financial institutes that could invest in new inventions and factories. Europe fell behind Great Britain in industrial production because of the European craftsman guild regulations, custom and barrier tolls, transportation issues, and the fact that Europeans were more cautious and did not take risks involved with new inventions.
The Industrial Revolution was a time of great, life-changing inventions. The invention such as the furnace, the steam engine, the Spinning Jenny, and the "Rocket" locomotive changed the world forever. Railroads and steam locomotives far surpassed ships and canals in importance during the Industrial Revolution. There were both positive and negative impacts of the Industrial Revolution. Positive impacts were greater employment opportunities, population boom, the use of machines rather than manual labor, more affordable products, huge advancements in medicine, and the average person could attain more wealth and had an easier life. Negative impacts were no labor laws, pollution, and dangerous working conditions.
Today we continued studying the gender of nouns, this time reviewing the rules learned in lesson 1 and learning new ones from lesson 2. After knowing most of the rules for determining the gender of a noun, he worked on a couple of exercises from the book, pages 30 and 31.
Today we focused on the events with the Iranian soccer team during the World Cup this week and the athletes' messaging about their government. There is international concern for their safety once they return to Iran because they lost to the U.S. yesterday. We located Iran on a map. An overview of Iranian history was necessary in order for Cameron to grasp current events there.
We examined different websites to evaluate their interactive content and customer service efforts. We learned about the benefits of affiliate marketing and mobile vs desktop optimization. New topics included how market research is necessary for companies to determine what should appear on the landing page to increase time spent on the site and lead to conversions.
Assignment
None
Session Minutes
45
Minutes Student Attended
45
Lesson Comments
Cameron gave great examples of interactive websites like being able to have golf clubs fitted online and understood the convenience offered to the customer.